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My song
Sept 10, 2006 13:56:06 GMT -5
Post by raoulsucks on Sept 10, 2006 13:56:06 GMT -5
Well, everyone, I wrote a song....Here it is. It's called come away with me
(Verese 1)Come away with me, give my loneliness a break
come away with me and ease my aching heart
(this is the Refrain) Come away with me right now this time
far from all our troubles and worries
leave them all behind
(Verese 2)Come away with me right now I cant wait
Come away with me and we'll be gone
(Refrain)
(verese 3)I wanna see the ocean where dolphins play
I wanna cross a mountain, to see the other side
Come away with me(Rest for 8 beats)
Come away with me
If you like it or dont like it tell me! ;D
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My song
Sept 10, 2006 19:01:52 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Sept 10, 2006 19:01:52 GMT -5
it's really good, but isn't it to short?
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My song
Sept 13, 2006 15:38:50 GMT -5
Post by *Zorro, The Masked Avenger!* on Sept 13, 2006 15:38:50 GMT -5
I think it's fine, but maybe you could make the refrain longer...
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My song
Sept 13, 2006 17:08:46 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Sept 13, 2006 17:08:46 GMT -5
yeah
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My song
Sept 15, 2006 16:29:27 GMT -5
Post by ~Nip the potato Chip~ on Sept 15, 2006 16:29:27 GMT -5
i really like it, but it is a bit short.
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My song
Sept 15, 2006 21:14:16 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Sept 15, 2006 21:14:16 GMT -5
yeah, it's not really that much like a song, more like a refrain
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My song
Sept 16, 2006 13:59:18 GMT -5
Post by raoulsucks on Sept 16, 2006 13:59:18 GMT -5
I know, I just couldnt think of any more words to it. If you have any suggestions for any extra verses or something, tell me. It does have an accompinent, so it kinda has to work with the notes. If you want to, call me at 286-5855. (The area code is 850!)
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My song
Sept 16, 2006 21:55:01 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Sept 16, 2006 21:55:01 GMT -5
yeah...
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My song
Sept 20, 2006 20:46:52 GMT -5
Post by *Zorro, The Masked Avenger!* on Sept 20, 2006 20:46:52 GMT -5
I really don't think you should be giving out your phone # like that....
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My song
Sept 21, 2006 17:54:47 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Sept 21, 2006 17:54:47 GMT -5
yeah you have a point zorro
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My song
Sept 21, 2006 19:44:19 GMT -5
Post by *Zorro, The Masked Avenger!* on Sept 21, 2006 19:44:19 GMT -5
Man, I have a VERY strong urge to delete that post, and by giving out your phone # you can endanger us ALL!
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My song
Sept 23, 2006 8:38:45 GMT -5
Post by ~Nip the potato Chip~ on Sept 23, 2006 8:38:45 GMT -5
Yeah, well you can just modify it, as you both are admins.
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My song
Sept 24, 2006 19:09:09 GMT -5
Post by *Zorro, The Masked Avenger!* on Sept 24, 2006 19:09:09 GMT -5
It's rude to modify people's posts unless absolutely necessary, and whenever you do that it messes up the posts below because they'll be talking about something fixed...
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My song
Oct 5, 2006 19:43:56 GMT -5
Post by SoN oF a BiScUiT! on Oct 5, 2006 19:43:56 GMT -5
yeah...I give you permission to modify zooro
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